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He was by best friend
I tried to help him

But a dark cloud
so black, came down
engulfed the soul I knew.

I watched the lightnin'
turn into
silent hiding  
the day I caught his wrist
what is this
the scars were emotional

It was always hovering
what was it
that seeped inside
into his heart.
into his very mind now

I know who and what it is,  
the sneers, jeers
glares an' stares
everyone whisperin'
in eachothers ears
was just to much to bear.
(He said he didn't care) - 1 Min mark

He gave up sleeping,
then eating,
He said no one cared
when he tried to tell his mom.


I recall that day,
the look on his face!
            (it turned from smiles and laughter
            to tears and fears)
shivering as he walked away!

I recall that very day,
The look on his face!
shivering as he walked away!

Tell me what they say
what their sayin' to ya' now,

Tell me what they say
what their yellin' at'chyeah now,
tell me what they're
whispering
behind your back now!
( screamed into your face,
                  pushed you into place)
taunts, threats
warnings, not just from the kids we knew,
it was the teachers too.
Oh God we reached out,
tried to get some help,
but everyone
even his parents
denied
the world he and I
we all knew.
The screams and jeers,
beatings, sneers
as we walked through the halls

(Bridge) 2:20 mark
I recall!
Ahh!
I
Ahh!
I recall!
(Bridge)

He gave up that day
right after school
and walked into
another world
I could not go to.

they all said
he had no place

oh his life,
was it so worthless!?

I watched as the
hollowness
descend!
I could not,
god though I tried
my words could not break through

the look upon his face
He did his best,
to hide the shame

But I could see straight through
that mask was entirely lucent

Bullied to,
bullied to,
Bullied to,
the breaking point!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Don't tell me
don't tell me now
he was worthless
this is what you all did
and I am left
to pay the price
and pick up what is left
am I the only one who regrets

Sending him to school.
You know how you're supposed to be doing something and for whatever reason your artistic side, creative side, brain what have you decides it's NOT going to do what you NEED to do (like work) it's going to run off and to THIS instead?
...
:-/!
yeah.
I've got one of those, hell weeks? Nights? I donno.
either way I've been reading a LOT of Bullied and Victim stuff lately and well, having been EXTREMELY HARRASSED a.k.a. Bullied myself when I was young I totally identify.
Hell, I STILL am; by my own family.
(My Dad esp. >X-P!)
But yeah, there you go.

So I ended up staying up all night (It's 7:30 a.m. now and I'm still up >X_P!) and writing this.
*chuckle:-)*

It's a Bully Sing Along! lol! :-D

I put the lyrics as best I could to Nicklebacks - "Just to get High" song.

See if you can sing along to it with what I wrote here ;-)
I tried all night and couldn't, partially cause I'm OLD and SLOW now ;-)P!

Well, let me know what you all think.
and maybe I'll put up the FAR BETTER Lyrics that don't really go with the tune, but say a LOt more and are just plain better.
for now though, I'm going to sleep.
night!
-_- Zzzz...!
:-)
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Mwitu-Askari Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyou for entering this in our contest! I wish you the best of luck!
~Danni
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0L50NJ4 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're Welcome and Thank You :):hug:
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iLantiis Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Featured your work here!
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0L50NJ4 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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So Much!:)
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is so sad but the way you wrote it really brings the emotions to the forefront
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0L50NJ4 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, Thank you very very much.
^_^
:hug: Love: :hug:
^_^

Most of what I write it is "Soul Speak" as I've termed it.My soul itself just drying out.
:-(!
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gothchick913 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i know what you mean....i usually write to release pent up emotions
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0L50NJ4 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
Yeah.
:-/
Thanks for the comment. It helps.
:-)
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:icongothchick913:
gothchick913 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome. glad to help
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0L50NJ4 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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